Music is a thing which everybody loves; most of people listen to it every day.
They need to download music from the internet, for listening(gr. - in order to listen) to songs they love. However, there are people who buy CDs of the songs they love. There is a question- is downloading music for free moral? Some claim that it is like a crime or theft, while others think that when we copy music, it is(gr. - does) not really hurt the singers.
I think downloading music for free from the internet is not illegal(it actually is illegal). I believe that the singers become more and more popular when we load their songs and listen to them and know them so well. So, I can't understand why it is wrong, it just help(gr.) them.
They need to download music from the internet, for listening(gr. - in order to listen) to songs they love. However, there are people who buy CDs of the songs they love. There is a question- is downloading music for free moral? Some claim that it is like a crime or theft, while others think that when we copy music, it is(gr. - does) not really hurt the singers.
I think downloading music for free from the internet is not illegal(it actually is illegal). I believe that the singers become more and more popular when we load their songs and listen to them and know them so well. So, I can't understand why it is wrong, it just help(gr.) them.
in addition, when the singers are popular they make(ww.) many concerts and pepole who like them buy tickets to(ww. - for) their show. it is livelihood for the singers(phr.).
Anther point is that buying CDs is very expensive. Many people don't have a lot of money so they can't afford to spend all their money for listening(ww.) to music they love. Furthermore, when someone loves songs of more than one singer, he needs to buy all their CDs. It is a lot of money.
In conclusion, as I see it, downloading music from the internet is a good thing. All of us can listen to the songs we love without pay(ing) money for it. In addition, it even help(gr.) the singers become more popular.
Anther point is that buying CDs is very expensive. Many people don't have a lot of money so they can't afford to spend all their money for listening(ww.) to music they love. Furthermore, when someone loves songs of more than one singer, he needs to buy all their CDs. It is a lot of money.
In conclusion, as I see it, downloading music from the internet is a good thing. All of us can listen to the songs we love without pay(ing) money for it. In addition, it even help(gr.) the singers become more popular.
Better. Good work.
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Daphna.
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